Monday, 17 November 2008

Feedback #1

Well done - focused, detailed video research. However, to secure a level 4 planning overall, you need to now add the following:
1. more evidence of group discussions and initial ideas - record all your conversations about your track, ideas, concerns.
2. Your initial response to the track needs to be more detailed - your mood boards should be "annotated" with a blog post, explaining your response.

I will be interested in seeing a record of your ideas on mise-en-sceene - this track has a real US feel and how will you deal with that, filming in January in the UK with grey skys? These are issues with picking American tracks.

2 comments:

c_fernandez said...

Also - you need to review and improve your auteur research...

Matt said...

alex...check out if Michel Gondry directed any rock video's, as we could incorporate his idea's with out video. Im sure Spike Jonze did so i'll look it up and post some research.